Tuesday, September 30, 2014

Bryant Park Peeping



ENG101
Ackeem Vohrnis
Descriptive Paragraph #1

 There is a well dressed man sitting down at the round table. He is wearing a red and blue plad  button down shirt, gray slacks, black socks, and brown Steve Madden shoes. The man is slightly unshaven, his facial hair blonde, and his hair blonde as well with a crew cut. The man leans back in his chair, right leg fully extended out, left leg slightly bent as he eats his meal. He has a white plastic bag on his lap, he dips his right hand into the bag and takes out a green and yellow bag that read “WISE All Natural Potato Chips”. He holds the bag in his right hand, dips his left hand into the bag and puts the chips in his mouth. His eyes close while he is chewing slowly. He sits prompt into the seat and puts the chip bag into the plastic bag and reaches into the plastic bag once again with two hands and pulls out a cheeseburger, his mouth slightly opened and eyes fixed on the burger as he takes it out the bag. He brings the burger to his mouth and closes his eyes as he takes a big bite of the burger. He brings both of his legs in and rests both of his elbows on his thighs as he holds the burger near his mouth still chewing from the previous bite. He suddenly looks down at his right pocket, food still bulging from the side of his right cheek, and begins to put the burger back into the bag.


Descriptive Paragraph #2

The man is sitting down next to a round table. He has a sky blue button down shirt on, the first two buttons are unbuttoned. He has on gray slacks that are slim fit, his pants are slightly raised, a brown belt with a gold buckle, brown dress shoes, black socks, and black slicked back hair. He is on his iPhone with his right leg crossed over his left, and he is shaking his right foot rapidly. He has on white headphones. The man has the phone in his right hand, he has no facial expression, he is concentrated on his phone. He takes his left hand and flicks his nose with his left thumb and sits upright into the chair and takes the headphones off. He wraps the headphones around his phone, puts the chair into the table, and begin walking away up the stairs.

Descriptive Paragraph #3

There is a man sitting at a round table with a empty Poland Spring bottle. He has his right elbow on the table with his phone in hand, placed on the right side of his ear. His left arm is stretched out against the other table chair, his forearm resting on the top of the chair. The man nods his head back and forth and begins to make gestures with his left hand. He makes a open palm, and then a closed fist. His hair consists of white, black, and gray hair, with a slightly bald spot in the middle oh his head. He has on a gray Adidas track jacket on with red stripes going down the sleeves, grey wind breaker pants, and grey Nike running sneakers. He takes his left hand and runs it through his hair, and then scratches his bald spot.

Descriptive Paragraph #4

A black pigeon is straddling across the walkway. It has white coloring along the edges of its wings. The pigeon stops walking and turns his head to the right, then the left, right again, and begins walking towards the steps. It hops up the first three steps, hops down one step and walks along the step, then hops back up to the third step. A man is running towards the steps, the pigeon begins to fly away and into the grass. The pigeon walks towards other pigeons in the grass and begins turning his head in all directions. It then raises its left wing and starts to pick at under its wing.

2 comments:

  1. I like the way you described the cheeseburger, it made me crave a veggie burger, very vivid scene! I like the flow of the pigeon, the short sentences, the repetition, it makes it feel anxious, like pigeons always seem to me.

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